The Thirteenth Tale by Diane Setterfield. The
trigger, as always is the first sentence. My writing pal took the approach that
it was a new home by a man who was about to replace his wife for one who could
have children. In both there was this sudden twist. I love doing these exercises.
They stimulate my writing for the day. However, I don't like the ending, but time was up.
We were idling that
morning in one of the front rooms on the first floor. Jamie had the Sunday
papers spread out and was laying on his stomach. I never understood how he
could be comfortable like that. A cup of coffee was next to him, but of course
drinking coffee on your stomach is nigh on to impossible.
The windows were open
for the first time that spring. The sweet smell of fresh cut grass, another
seasonal first, came through.
I was still in my
pajamas and sat on the couch with a woman’s magazine. I should remember which
one, but I don’t. It is one of the things that I blocked. I wish I could block
the phone call. I always thought police came in person to tell you that someone
had died, but this cop (I forgot the name along with the name of the magazine) said
that there had been an accident and I should get to Winchester General
Hospital. They needed to identify the victims.
Part of me hoped since
I was head for a hospital my parents were alive, but the police were waiting in
the office where we were told to go. Jamie held my hand so tightly, that I was
bruised for a week after, all though the funeral I stared at the black and
blue.
After I wanted to sell
the house—Jamie said that was stupid—it wasn’t like my parents died in that
room, but in a way they did for me. The only time we ever used the room again
was when we entertained and I usually found things to do in the kitchen or the
other living room. It’s not like the room was haunted or anything except for my
own memories.
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