I'm so happy. My writing buddy and I are back on doing our writing exercises, this time on Skype because she's in Argelès and I am in Geneva. The hiatus was caused by her moving. Now that she is settled our next writing date is tomorrow. The exercises are a wonderful trigger. Interesting in this one she concentrated on Betty and slowly unwound thread after thread. The book we used for this exercise was...(she said it was the only book unpacked.)
Welcome to the World Baby Girl
Fanny
Flagg
Trigger: Betty said,
“Mackie get some vanilla ice cream in a dish. I’m a nervous wreck.”
Mackie sighed. Betty
solved every problem with ice cream which was why she was no longer the lithe
girl he’d married twenty years ago. Now she heaved herself out of chairs and
panted when she walked upstairs. She used ice cream as something to calm her
nerves or to celebrate any event such as the sun going down.
Who ate ice cream on a
winter night?
His wife did.
He took his car keys
off the peg by the door where they always hung. His truck was parked in the
yard. He had bought it shortly after they were married and it had over 154,000
miles on it, but it still was in pristine shape.
He wasn’t one of those
good ole boys who let his truck get rusted. Any spot of rust and he was out
there with his sandpaper and spray paint can. Even the bed where he hauled wood
and landscaping equipment was cleaned every Sunday.
The engine hummed with
the turn of the key. He pulled out of their driveway. Sometimes he felt like
just going down the road and to keep going to he didn’t know where—a new life
somewhere. He could set up a landscaping business anywhere.
He loved his work,
turning chaos into something beautiful. His latest job had come from the new
rich bitch in town who had bought the $4.8 million mansion that everyone said
would never sell because of the price. The lawn had been boring she’d told him,
and she’d wanted him to create a magic spot. He’d done that with fountains and
bushes that hid a silent place with a mosaic bunch where she could sit and
read.
He suspected she never
had time to read, what with her being head of the software company that he was
always reading about when he looked at the financial papers.
Quite a looker she
was. Not skinny-skinny, but well curved and not over curved. Her hair was
always in place not like Betty whose roots were two inches of dark trimmed with
blond.
Not reasonable to
compare the two women. Betty was his wife. She was loyal, took care of the
kids, kept the house nice.
The store was coming
on his left. He started to signal a turn and then changed his mind and gunned
the engine heading toward the open highway.
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